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I love this comic! it's hilarious how protective alice's father is! and the fact that alice never knew what a kiss was! oh man her fath...


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The whole army became silent.
“I didn’t think so.” He grabbed my hand and walked off confidently. He guided me back to his house and used his foot to open the door. The second the door opened, he ran up to his bedroom all flustered, and slammed it.
“Babe? Handsome? What are you doing?” I giggled as I climbed the staircase.
“I-I can’t believe I just said all that to my troops… I am an awful King!” His flustered state shone through his words and it was hilarious.
“Neither can I… But that was so charming. Congrats.” I replied with a teasing tone.
“I am screwed, Kresta! They’re gonna tease me till the day I die!” He protested with a tone of anxiety.
“Want me to kill you now and prove they’ll keep teasing you even after death?” I crossed my arms and stared at the door with a grin.
“NO! FUCK NO! And you’re not helping!” Fickle got angry. He’s so cute when he
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“But you’re hurt! If we don’t clean the wound, it’ll get infected.” She stated as she ignored my retreat and eventually made me back against a wall.
“Come near my girl and you’ll need to patch up yourself!” Fickle got between us while glaring at the Queen.
“Why are you so hostile towards me?! I am just trying to help!” She sobbed pathetically. She seemed genuinely honest, but my hatred of her is the only thing that gives me more logic than ever.
“HELP?! First you murder the king, followed by my mother, then my father. Next, you allowed those pirates to kidnap me! I thought I was never gonna see Fickle ever again because he wasn’t scared of water but I am! He swam home, only for me to come back eventually to find my father dead and my love tied up mercilessly! You are a seriously stuffed up woman! A complete narcissistic psychopath!” I screamed at her.
“Don’t you get it? That smoke was the demon in
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“My, my. This is quite entertaining. More fun than killing an old man with a crown.” The Queen snicked, summoned a cocktail and took a sip with a wide grin.
“My, my. This is hilarious. I never knew a cow could be able to drink a cocktail.” I spat at the flames in her direction. Fickle’s shoulders shook like he was laughing really hard, his eyes squinting happily.
“Due to an arrogant brat, I have raised the bars.” The bitch with the crown clicked her fingers and the same smoke that has Fickle tied up has appeared around my wrists. I grumbled all the horrible words I would use to describe her under my breath.
“Unfair much?” I knitted my eyebrows in frustration, contrary to the Queen, who was grinning sadistically. “Would you rather I bind your ankles?” she hissed.
“In all honesty, I’d rather you bind your mouth. Your words are irrelevant to any kind of existence, and your breath? It smells so bad, I wonder if i
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As I stepped back away from this abnormal scene, I overhear a dry, hoarse laugh with an evil ring to it. I twist around to see the Queen and a cloaked being half her size.
“I see you found my magic manikin? Here is your true Prince!” she yanked the cloak off her companion and there was Fickle, kneeling with black smoke restraining him and wrapped around his mouth.
“What the hell do you want from me?!” I lost my cool and screamed out. I clenched my fists, knowing she’s more powerful than me, with her dark magic.
“Do you really want to know? I want the both of you dead so no-one will know that I killed the King!” Her glassy, beady eyes flickered with a flame of pure hatred and no remorse. It was obvious she wanted power over beauty, her blood red hair had turned a light shade of grey and her skin was pale and leathery.
“And when have we ever told anybody about it?! We’ve kept it to ourselves! We know of your power, we know you would k
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"Oh! N-no! I'm just...happy!" I smiled and used the sheet to wipe away my tears of joy.
"Then, why are you crying?" Vladimir raised an eyebrow.
"Well, no-one has ever given me something before! This is my first present! So, thank you, Vladimir!" I bowed my head to him. Not even Nick has given me anything besides his time, and Im rich, so I can have anything I want. It feels nice that the first person who has ever given me something was a rather distant person, one who wasn't visibly friendly. He groomed my hair that the cheeky Alejandro had messed up.
"That's a bit better."Vladimir nodded with approval as he kept stroking my hair like a cat. With each stroke, I realised how I feel. I was in love with Nick at first, but like a man's ambition, I wanted something that I couldn't get: Vladimir's heart. I was falling in love with him! That's why Nick's kiss didn't feel right, my heart was subconsciously chasing Vlad's affection. I'd be lying if I said that Nick wasn't attractive, but he had
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"Oh non! Dis is too sad! He wouldn't stop asking mwa for advice on making a girl fall for him..." Louise crossed her arms with a disappointed smile.
"Are you crazy, sinurita?! He would be more popular than me in Spain! Why?!" Alejandro shouted.
"I-I don't know! I don't know how my heart works, I only know what it wants..." I trailed off.
"Are you sure he is not The One?" Balondemu gently rested his hand on my slumped shoulder. I felt too bad to reply, so I shook my head instead.
"If she back in Japan, she be killed straight away for saying no." Takeshi whispered to Evelyn.
"Indeed! I have heard your beautiful culture has some gruesome laws over there. But I must say, to me, she is an imbecile for even rejecting such a fine man! Not even I could find such a perfect gentlemen. For example, my fiancé was simple minded! He fell for my sister..." Evelyn hung her head sadly. Takeshi handed her a cloth and patted her shoulder.
"I thought you...had a crush on me since we were small. Was I
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I don't know why I followed this strange boy up here or how he got me to do it, but my conscious is back in control and with no more than a few seconds, I ran towards where I thought I heard the crew.
"Charlotte, duck." Vladimir pulled a pistol from his jacket pocket and aimed at the cute, mysterious boy. As I curled into a ball, a dry gunshot rang in the air. I slowly uncurled and all of a sudden, I felt like I was being hugged from behind.
"Sorry I was terrible to you on the ship. I don't really ever apologize, so take this as an rare privilege." As he finished, he stroked my dirty blonde, wavy hair. I felt like I had Regis Mortis, I couldn't move!
"What happened to the boy?" I managed to turn my head to see a limp body, crimson liquid oozed from him and stained the cream clay.
"You mean the Kishi? You aren't blind are you? Your looking at it." His low, sexy Russian accent rang in my ear.
"W-well, uh, thanks! I owe you, big time!" I smiled sweetly at his heroism. He gave me a casual,
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They look as though they've never had a problem or argument in their lives. They were the walking definition of a perfect family. I envied them, with the parents so loving, not only towards eachother, but to their kids. My parents gave me a few hundred thousand dollars and told me I can have whatever I want and need, as long as I didn't get in their way. The afternoon sunset made my face glow as I hung my head while our ship sailed past the happiness and the memory of a happy household. Soon after we had entered the Nile we landed in Sais, where we docked our ship in the Pharaoh's private dock.
" ah , 'annah min aljayd 'ann narakum marratan 'ukhraa, Ammon" the Pharaoh came out.
"It's good to see you too! I wish to introduce my friends." Ammon stepped back with us and gestures for us to bow.
"They look worthy of my trust. I would like you to stay, but we have a terrible creature who migrated in the wrong direction. The Kishi!" The Pharaoh looked troubled and was trying to hide his fear.
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The waves dance, fall, crash and tango but the ship doesn't take any notice of the turbulence. The sea is sparkling like a 901 Blue cocktail and the crew are lively and chatting away like old friends, except Vladimir is sitting in the crows nest while reading a red leather book. Nick is learning pickup lines from Louise, since Paris is 'The City of Love', and Louise is also giving him tips on how to put on a French accent, being French herself. The tiny Scott is sitting on a barrel and sharpening his dagger with a rock of some sort while Evelyn, Takeshi and Balondemu are playing cards on the deck floor. Ammon was taking a nap on one of the shrouds in a hammock type thing. Alejandro is at the steering wheel, admiring the beautiful sea crash and meed like making bread. We've been sailing for about four hours or so. I got sick of listening to Nick and Louise's sappy 'Love Lesson" and climbed up the opposite shroud to Ammon's hammock to eventually reach Vladimir, who was content by reading
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"Will ye shut da hell up, ya banshee! Great Scottish Kilts! Ya tryin' ta kill me all over again, Lassy?" His Scottish accent echoed alond the shore. I quickly covered my mouth and as I did, the groaning and lifeless noises grew louder, I looked to see what the racket was all about. Skeletons! Some wearing tarted, soaked fabrics, torn with time, while others wore accessories like jewellery and goggles made of metal. 8 skeletons all together, all old as fairytales and as wrecked as a thin curtain against a psychopathic cat. As they submerged from the water, skin began to grow, climb and multiply across their salty, worn out bones. I turned around to find Nick but he was annoying the Scottish skull.
"Ya leprochorn! Whatcha think ya doin' to me?! I swear on the green fields o' Scotlan' I'll  cut ye in half with me best axe I be savin' for me mother! I been sharpen'in it for decades! 'Bout time I used it!" His accent made me laugh, despite the fact that skeletons were growing skin agai
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I was randomly walking around the Hotel by the sea side, I looked around the hallway and my eyes spotted the door to the public veranda that had the best view of the sea. As I walked through the beautiful wooden door with all it's little roses and vines carved into it. When I ventured from the semi smelling Vanilla air conditioning to the saltiness of the deep, blue sea, my tongue tasted awful.
"Hey, Charlotte, what's up?" Nick Jacalar was leaning against the perfectly shellacked handrails with the silver wire beneath.
"Perhaps the sky?" I gave a confused expression. He burst into a fit of laughter and held his stomach.
"Your ignorance never fail to crack me up!" Tears fell down his cheeks from laughing so hard. I rolled me eyes and slapped him on the back of his head.
"Oww! Come on! I have a cramp AND you just slapped me! No fair!" His expression switched to that of completely entertained to a semi painful frown.
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Native African: Balondemu; chosen one. A slave during Slave Labour, his parents were killed and assaulted before him when he was a child. He stole this ship to help his people who were all heartlessly kidnapped from their families with the intention of returning them home safely.
Scotsman(Scottish man): Teimoso; stubborn. A great warrior who loves gold, women and beer, he is a ronin, his master was defeated by his archenemy and both killed each other, leaving him with everything his master owned, though all he wanted was to earn a humble word of praise. He joined the ship to become worthy of succeeding his master.
Japanese man: Takeshi; fierce warrior. Another ronin, taken and raised to be a ninja at the age of 5 to serve a selfish general, who was planning to kill half the population so he could add to his harem of concubines. He joined the crew to get away from the war.
Egyptian: Ammon; Unseen, concealed or hidden. Trained assassin and can blend  in the night and day with no one
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I never felt his presence, but Fickle was outside the kitchen window, he had walked here to apologize. He heard everything I said about love, his heart snapped and he walked back to his home with a face of sadness and depreciation.

I ate dinner alone that night. A new thought popped in my mind every chew I made. My heart was heavy with guilt. After I had finished, I tidied up and went to bed. As I tossed and turned, thinking of the words I used to my father, little did I know those words were like a spell, cursing myself.

The sun shone happily through my window, pissing me off.

“Sun, just go back behind the hills. Nobody likes you!” I grumbled as I got out of my cosy bed, the sound of pebbles smashing outside my window gave me a start. “The fuck?” I walked to my window expecting little kids to be throwing stuff, but I found Fickle, throwing little rocks at my window.

“Morning!” He yelled happily. I gave him the ‘Why are you so happy? We had a minor fight yesterday!’ face and rolled my eyes.

“Come on, Kresta! Don’t be so grouchy!” He laughed off my expression.

“First the sun pisses me off, now YOU’RE doing it?! What the heck did I do so wrong?!” I rubbed my eyes with a grumpy frown.

“The sun saw your beautiful sleeping face first? Damn the Sun.” He put his hands on his hips and spat that remark out dramatically.

“What has gotten into you? You on drugs?” my reply was harsh but didn’t affect his happiness.

“Nope, just happy to see you. I wanna apologize about my emotional outburst yesterday. Can you forgive me?” Fickle put his hands together in prayer.

“Sure.” I crossed my arms on the window sill. His happy attitude suddenly became a controlled rage. “What?” I asked as I looked down at him.

“What about your apology?” I glared at me. “Sorry for being so unsupportive and walking off.” I blurted out. He tapped his foot and asked “And?”

“That’s all I did wrong!” I got flustered, thinking about what else I have done to make him angry.

“I heard your definition of LOVE last night! Is that all you see it as?!” He stormed through the front door and ran up to my bedroom door, forcing it open.

“Yes. It is the truth, whether or not it’s my personal belief.” I turned around and looked him in the eye.

“I call bullshit! You sound like a stuck up brat with a pain in her ass when you think like that! I thought you were different!” Fickle whimpered like I just ripped out his heart and left him to bleed.

“I AM different! How many women do you know that can take down a whole army by herself? What about women that made the hottest soldier in the whole army fall in love with them?! A woman who can be honest with whatever emotions she may or may not have, that can defeat a demon inside a madwoman, that can… survive without a mother.” I felt my cheeks getting wet, tears streaming down my face. Fickle looked at me like he wanted to cradle me in his arms, but he supressed that feeling and continued to glare at me.

“So is that supposed to excuse the fact that you broke my heart with your words?! That you, a woman with no heart and lousy excuses, has the permission to snap a man’s heart?! You can break any of my bones, I have hundreds of them, but I only have one heart.”

“The only purpose of your heart is to keep your blood pumping. Your brain is responsible for your emotions! How stupid are you?! I am attracted to you, physically and emotionally. If you were to leave me and I’d never see you again, my world will collapse. If you stopped having the same feelings as I do for you towards me, I would end my life because the suffering would be unbearable. I need you. I have never adored another man before. There is no other man for me, because… you are all I need and more.” I fell to the ground crying and in a complete state of embarrassment.

“Not good enough. If you are just dating me because I’m hot or am about to be the next King, I’d rather dump you that live knowing that you’re just dating me to satisfy your ego!” Fickle spat those words at me and left my room.

“Fickle! Get back here you bully! I don’t care if I have to bolt you down with chains, I will if it means you won’t leave me because of some stupid misunderstanding!” I catch up to him and hold his arm.

“Fuck off.” He replies. “Never! You may think I see you as a method of releasing my pain, but you are wrong! You are the reason I am happy! Do you really think I’d rescue someone I hate from the hands of a mad Queen?!” I stubbornly held on.

“I guess not.” He gave me a conflicted look, making me feel a little hope that he is being convinced.

“Fickle, my love, what do I have to do for you to believe me?” I bated my eyelashes seductively. His cheeks went crimson from my question and he stood there, pondering. “Kiss me,” He nodded his head. “but only if you care about me without a doubt.” He instructed. I nodded and got on the tip of my toes. I looked him in his eyes, enchanted by them and kissed him bashfully.

“Geez… don’t make me do such embarrassing stuff again, okay?!” I went red and turned my face away. “Fine.” He gave me a hug. “And no more fights!” I warned him, regaining my composure. “Okay,” Fickle kissed me on my forehead. “but only if you become my Queen.” He added, resting his perfectly chiselled chin on my head.

The whole army became silent.

“I didn’t think so.” He grabbed my hand and walked off confidently. He guided me back to his house and used his foot to open the door. The second the door opened, he ran up to his bedroom all flustered, and slammed it.

“Babe? Handsome? What are you doing?” I giggled as I climbed the staircase.

“I-I can’t believe I just said all that to my troops… I am an awful King!” His flustered state shone through his words and it was hilarious.

“Neither can I… But that was so charming. Congrats.” I replied with a teasing tone.

“I am screwed, Kresta! They’re gonna tease me till the day I die!” He protested with a tone of anxiety.

“Want me to kill you now and prove they’ll keep teasing you even after death?” I crossed my arms and stared at the door with a grin.

“NO! FUCK NO! And you’re not helping!” Fickle got angry. He’s so cute when he’s mad.

“Neither are you! How am I supposed to hug you if you’re on the opposite of the door?!” I tapped my foot with impatience.

“Magic?” He stated. “Leave that to the Queen. The only thing I can do is use my physical skills. I’ll kick this door down!” I shouted at him.

“NO! Fuck, Kresta… ”He sighed.

“Well if you won’t stop acting like a coward, I am leaving! Bye.” I began to walk off and I heard the door swing open without caring about being torn from the frame.

“I-If you leave, I am dumping you!” Fickle screamed at me.

“Go ahead. You love me so much you’d be begging me to take you back again in what, ten seconds? Plus, you just embarrassed the fuck out of yourself in front on the whole army, you wouldn’t waste your reputation by dumping me 5 minutes later, would you?” I kept on walking away and reached the front door when I  felt a hand grab my shoulders.

“By Thor, you drive me mad! You are rude, arrogant, stubborn, such a smartass and yet I still love you!” He took a stronger grip on my shoulder as though experiencing pain while spitting out my flaws without taking a breath.

“Love me all you want, but I refuse to be here when you’re listing off my flaws and in a state of emotional turbulence. I wonder if you’re a woman with all that emotion.” I slapped his hand off my shoulder and walked out the door.

“Kresta! Wait!” I heard Fickle scream out to me, but with a sadistic heart, I didn’t stop walking away. I soon got home and in good time too, dad was making dinner.

“Can I help you, old man?” I walked through the door frame, the curtain still torn from the queen.

“Can you knock over men with a club?” dad replied with a light-hearted giggle.

“Can I test it on you?” I grinned. Dad shook his head with a sigh. “What’s wrong Dad? Is something bothering the General?” I asked while beginning to pluck the scales of the freshly caught fish.

“Kresta, what does love mean to you?” Dad asked with sadness in his tone.

“Well… personally, it stands for Lustful, Overestimated, Violent Emotion.” I answered with a half-hearted tone. He must have seen through it and his eyes wanted an explanation, but he kept his question at bay. ”why I say that is because people always confuse lust and love. It’s an overestimated thought because people believe it’s simple but it’s the most complex thing in the world. When you are hurt by the person you love or made jealous, you tend to lash out, henceforth it is violent. And the fun part is, it is one of many useless emotions. It can blind your judgement, make you feel weak or strong, is founded by fragile materials like trust, respect, joy and many others.” I explained. I looked at Dad with a curious gaze and his face was covered in a gloomy shadow, like I had just told him his wife was a lie. “That’s my personal belief, you don’t have to go along with it” I warned him.

“I know. Thanks.” Dad suddenly stopped cooking dinner and mumbled “I’m going to bed. Night.” And he walked to his bedroom while gently closing his door behind him. What have I done?! We were all happy when I got here then dad asked that stupid question and I scared him off. I hate not being able to have emotions!

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“Give me one good reason I’d let the crazy maggot who stabbed me come anywhere near me!” Dad puffed his cheeks in a quiet rage.

“She’s changed now Dad. It was the demon who influenced her actions.” I spoke up. When she was in her state before, she would never care about my wounds, but when that tyrant spirit left her, she had an earnestly sorry look in her eyes. Regret was flowing alongside her blood within her veins, and thoughts of how to make up and repent were the only things brewing in her once corrupted mind.

“I-I have no weapons!” She pleaded. “I just feel scared and alone… please have mercy.” Tears ran down her cheeks.

“For the way you have acted in the past, influenced or not, is unforgivable.” Fickle began speaking like a true king. “You have murdered the former King, the General’s wife, attempted murder with the General’s daughter, banished and kidnapped the true King of this land, slaughtered the blood of the innocent and worst of all… You have royally pissed… me… off!” Fickle yelled the last part.

“My Queen!” The royal guards marched at full speed towards us, unsheathing their swords and pointing them at Fickle.

“Hold your ground, maggots!” Dad barked at them. All the guards came to a halt with a conflicted look. “She is no Queen. Behold your TRUE King!” He pointed at Fickle. The guards started laughing as though they didn’t believe the words of their General. Their taunting laughter made Dad angrier by the second. “You dare fucking laugh at the man who has trained you and has single-handedly assassinated a whole armada?! I know all your names, weak spots and vulnerabilities. A good General knows all his men, a great General knows how to make his fleet tremble and pee their pants. Wanna fucking make me mad, ya bunch of kids with a flower fetish?!” Dad had his deadly axe in his hand, ready to fight, a sadistic and challenging grin as his battle helmet.

“Bring it on!” a soldier came at dad wielding a perfectly sharpened sword. The moment he came near the General, he was split in half with a single blow.

“Anyone else wanna join the dumbass bastard?!” the General bellowed at the top of his lungs, making a chilling echo. The whole army quietly chatted and conversed about the consequences.

“We are sorry for doubting yo-” Dad grabbed the soldier, who was speaking, by the throat, cutting the soldier’s sentence short. “Rule number fucking one! NEVER say sorry! Ya stupid little worm with a chunk of dirt up your ass and shit as your brain!” Dad screamed into the soldier’s ear and dropped the man with a loud thud.

“I trained you bunch of rose sniffing mutts! I taught you all to kill without mercy, to never give into temptations, to never believe that you are weak, to always be loyal to the King and I and to keep your lustful, greedy, never gonna happen eyes off my daughter!” dad was furious, the blood of the dead soldier splattered on his face and dripping off his axe.

“I’m a naughty boy, Kresta. I’ve never been able to keep my eyes off you.” Fickle whispered in my ear, causing me to blush.

“S-seriously Fickle?! Don’t say such things!” I slapped him on the shoulder.

“How come Fickle is allowed to get his hands on her but we were never able to?!” a random soldier yelled.

“Because you bunch of worthless, unloyal and extremely dumb ants have never been worthy of her! Fickle was the only one who gave me a good reason to let me allow them to be together!” Dad yelled back even madder than before.

“Kresta is the hottest girl in the whole village! We can’t help ourselves!” a random soldier spoke up.

“She looks exactly like her mother. You might as well seduce my wife!” Dad got really angry.

“And boys. She’s mine. So whoever just spat that out, leave those words to me. If you bunch of assholes look at MY girl like a hunk of sexy meat, I’ll fucking kill you.” Fickle stated while turning me around and gave me a deep kiss. “So… Any comments, dickheads?” He grinned at them with bloodthirsty eyes.

“But you’re hurt! If we don’t clean the wound, it’ll get infected.” She stated as she ignored my retreat and eventually made me back against a wall.

“Come near my girl and you’ll need to patch up yourself!” Fickle got between us while glaring at the Queen.

“Why are you so hostile towards me?! I am just trying to help!” She sobbed pathetically. She seemed genuinely honest, but my hatred of her is the only thing that gives me more logic than ever.

“HELP?! First you murder the king, followed by my mother, then my father. Next, you allowed those pirates to kidnap me! I thought I was never gonna see Fickle ever again because he wasn’t scared of water but I am! He swam home, only for me to come back eventually to find my father dead and my love tied up mercilessly! You are a seriously stuffed up woman! A complete narcissistic psychopath!” I screamed at her.

“Don’t you get it? That smoke was the demon inside of me and it was control-”The queen replied but the smoke had become a human type figure and entangled her which stopped her from releasing another word.

“As a child,” The demon started speaking with a cold, hoarse, dry voice, “She was interested in magic, Black magic. It’s the kind of magic which summons my kind and leaves the magic user vulnerable to possession. ” It grinned, serrated teeth like a shark glistened. “I did so. I possessed her and made her do all these things. I was that voice in her head, controlling her thoughts, tactics and moves.” It stopped and looked into the terrified eyes of the Queen, like a lover would look into their significant other’s eyes, the demon’s eyes softened. “I possessed her because it’s my job. However, soon after, I fell in love with this beautiful nightmare. But my feelings were turned down by this wretch.” The demon’s smile became a pained frown. It threw the Queen to the ground like rubbish.

“I can’t love you!” The Queen cried, “You’re evil! I never wanted you to possess me! I didn’t mean to send you a mixed message!” she made the demon angrier with her petty excuses, which weren’t even convincing in the slightest.

“If you ever come near me again, I’ll drag you to the Underworld with me and treat you as a toy.” The demon pointed a guilty finger at the Queen and vanished. The fire lit arena turned to sand and the next thing I knew, the three of us are in the sandy beach again.

“Well… that was exciting.” Fickle sighed and smiled sarcastically. Just as he said that, I noticed a figure walking towards the beach.

“Kresta! Where are ya?!” A man with the same tone as my father yells into the darkness.

“Dad?!” I cried out to him. Tears swell in my eyes, making it hard to see where my feet land and I trip over a few times trying to get to the man.

“My little Warrior!” The man became clearer and clearer that it was definitely my father.

“Dad!”I sobbed uncontrollably. The pain my heart had been burdened with was instantly turned into a feeling of bliss, joy and the kind of emotion you feel with the words ‘Thank Thor you’re alive!’

I looked at Dad with disbelief, suddenly paralysed with confusion, how is he alive?!

“But… I saw you dead on the ground with a sword through your chest… How are you standing in front of me?! ” I stood still, a frown of confusion creeping on my face.

“I dunno… I woke up with the sword beside me, a hole in me shirt an’ a demon telling me to make corrections on a few things. He also said to tell ya that he’s sorry for letting all this stuff happen.” He grinned while hugging me. Fickle silently joined the hug and gave me a sneaky kiss on my cheek so Dad wouldn’t hear or see it.

“Can I join the huggie too?” The Queen sat on the sand, looking at us like a puppy would look at a hunk of steak hoping to get a bite.

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digitalbird06 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2016
 Snowman fella- Happy new year (Messages) 

Haven't heard from you in awhile, just wanted to say hi and hope you're doing okay
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fioleefollower Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
heya! I haven't been able to get my hands on a computer in ages! im super sorry! but at least I started 2 new books! (Don't distress! im still going on TGD!) but my new ideas are running out with The Generals Daughter
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I was in a bit of a slump on my Fiolee story, but things have been picking up again and have posted a few new pages. Will you be posting your other stories on DA?
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fioleefollower Featured By Owner May 11, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
And just so you know, I've uploaded another page of The General's Daughter
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very soon, my friend
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Thank you kindly for the fave, it is most appreciated!
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Thank you so much for the watch!! c:
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Thanks for the Watch! 
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Thank you for the watch!
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