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I love this comic! it's hilarious how protective alice's father is! and the fact that alice never knew what a kiss was! oh man her fath...


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Resurrecting Ship: Page 7
"Oh! N-no! I'm just...happy!" I smiled and used the sheet to wipe away my tears of joy.
"Then, why are you crying?" Vladimir raised an eyebrow.
"Well, no-one has ever given me something before! This is my first present! So, thank you, Vladimir!" I bowed my head to him. Not even Nick has given me anything besides his time, and Im rich, so I can have anything I want. It feels nice that the first person who has ever given me something was a rather distant person, one who wasn't visibly friendly. He groomed my hair that the cheeky Alejandro had messed up.
"That's a bit better."Vladimir nodded with approval as he kept stroking my hair like a cat. With each stroke, I realised how I feel. I was in love with Nick at first, but like a man's ambition, I wanted something that I couldn't get: Vladimir's heart. I was falling in love with him! That's why Nick's kiss didn't feel right, my heart was subconsciously chasing Vlad's affection. I'd be lying if I said that Nick wasn't attractive, but he had
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"Oh non! Dis is too sad! He wouldn't stop asking mwa for advice on making a girl fall for him..." Louise crossed her arms with a disappointed smile.
"Are you crazy, sinurita?! He would be more popular than me in Spain! Why?!" Alejandro shouted.
"I-I don't know! I don't know how my heart works, I only know what it wants..." I trailed off.
"Are you sure he is not The One?" Balondemu gently rested his hand on my slumped shoulder. I felt too bad to reply, so I shook my head instead.
"If she back in Japan, she be killed straight away for saying no." Takeshi whispered to Evelyn.
"Indeed! I have heard your beautiful culture has some gruesome laws over there. But I must say, to me, she is an imbecile for even rejecting such a fine man! Not even I could find such a perfect gentlemen. For example, my fiancé was simple minded! He fell for my sister..." Evelyn hung her head sadly. Takeshi handed her a cloth and patted her shoulder.
"I thought you...had a crush on me since we were small. Was I
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I don't know why I followed this strange boy up here or how he got me to do it, but my conscious is back in control and with no more than a few seconds, I ran towards where I thought I heard the crew.
"Charlotte, duck." Vladimir pulled a pistol from his jacket pocket and aimed at the cute, mysterious boy. As I curled into a ball, a dry gunshot rang in the air. I slowly uncurled and all of a sudden, I felt like I was being hugged from behind.
"Sorry I was terrible to you on the ship. I don't really ever apologize, so take this as an rare privilege." As he finished, he stroked my dirty blonde, wavy hair. I felt like I had Regis Mortis, I couldn't move!
"What happened to the boy?" I managed to turn my head to see a limp body, crimson liquid oozed from him and stained the cream clay.
"You mean the Kishi? You aren't blind are you? Your looking at it." His low, sexy Russian accent rang in my ear.
"W-well, uh, thanks! I owe you, big time!" I smiled sweetly at his heroism. He gave me a casual,
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They look as though they've never had a problem or argument in their lives. They were the walking definition of a perfect family. I envied them, with the parents so loving, not only towards eachother, but to their kids. My parents gave me a few hundred thousand dollars and told me I can have whatever I want and need, as long as I didn't get in their way. The afternoon sunset made my face glow as I hung my head while our ship sailed past the happiness and the memory of a happy household. Soon after we had entered the Nile we landed in Sais, where we docked our ship in the Pharaoh's private dock.
" ah , 'annah min aljayd 'ann narakum marratan 'ukhraa, Ammon" the Pharaoh came out.
"It's good to see you too! I wish to introduce my friends." Ammon stepped back with us and gestures for us to bow.
"They look worthy of my trust. I would like you to stay, but we have a terrible creature who migrated in the wrong direction. The Kishi!" The Pharaoh looked troubled and was trying to hide his fear.
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The waves dance, fall, crash and tango but the ship doesn't take any notice of the turbulence. The sea is sparkling like a 901 Blue cocktail and the crew are lively and chatting away like old friends, except Vladimir is sitting in the crows nest while reading a red leather book. Nick is learning pickup lines from Louise, since Paris is 'The City of Love', and Louise is also giving him tips on how to put on a French accent, being French herself. The tiny Scott is sitting on a barrel and sharpening his dagger with a rock of some sort while Evelyn, Takeshi and Balondemu are playing cards on the deck floor. Ammon was taking a nap on one of the shrouds in a hammock type thing. Alejandro is at the steering wheel, admiring the beautiful sea crash and meed like making bread. We've been sailing for about four hours or so. I got sick of listening to Nick and Louise's sappy 'Love Lesson" and climbed up the opposite shroud to Ammon's hammock to eventually reach Vladimir, who was content by reading
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"Will ye shut da hell up, ya banshee! Great Scottish Kilts! Ya tryin' ta kill me all over again, Lassy?" His Scottish accent echoed alond the shore. I quickly covered my mouth and as I did, the groaning and lifeless noises grew louder, I looked to see what the racket was all about. Skeletons! Some wearing tarted, soaked fabrics, torn with time, while others wore accessories like jewellery and goggles made of metal. 8 skeletons all together, all old as fairytales and as wrecked as a thin curtain against a psychopathic cat. As they submerged from the water, skin began to grow, climb and multiply across their salty, worn out bones. I turned around to find Nick but he was annoying the Scottish skull.
"Ya leprochorn! Whatcha think ya doin' to me?! I swear on the green fields o' Scotlan' I'll  cut ye in half with me best axe I be savin' for me mother! I been sharpen'in it for decades! 'Bout time I used it!" His accent made me laugh, despite the fact that skeletons were growing skin agai
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I was randomly walking around the Hotel by the sea side, I looked around the hallway and my eyes spotted the door to the public veranda that had the best view of the sea. As I walked through the beautiful wooden door with all it's little roses and vines carved into it. When I ventured from the semi smelling Vanilla air conditioning to the saltiness of the deep, blue sea, my tongue tasted awful.
"Hey, Charlotte, what's up?" Nick Jacalar was leaning against the perfectly shellacked handrails with the silver wire beneath.
"Perhaps the sky?" I gave a confused expression. He burst into a fit of laughter and held his stomach.
"Your ignorance never fail to crack me up!" Tears fell down his cheeks from laughing so hard. I rolled me eyes and slapped him on the back of his head.
"Oww! Come on! I have a cramp AND you just slapped me! No fair!" His expression switched to that of completely entertained to a semi painful frown.
"You'd better be careful, you'll look like a grandpa way before I even g
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Native African: Balondemu; chosen one. A slave during Slave Labour, his parents were killed and assaulted before him when he was a child. He stole this ship to help his people who were all heartlessly kidnapped from their families with the intention of returning them home safely.
Scotsman(Scottish man): Teimoso; stubborn. A great warrior who loves gold, women and beer, he is a ronin, his master was defeated by his archenemy and both killed each other, leaving him with everything his master owned, though all he wanted was to earn a humble word of praise. He joined the ship to become worthy of succeeding his master.
Japanese man: Takeshi; fierce warrior. Another ronin, taken and raised to be a ninja at the age of 5 to serve a selfish general, who was planning to kill half the population so he could add to his harem of concubines. He joined the crew to get away from the war.
Egyptian: Ammon; Unseen, concealed or hidden. Trained assassin and can blend  in the night and day with no one
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I snuggled into Fickle’s arms without caring about the pain in my knees and kissed him with all the love in my heart. Tears streamed down my cheeks, tears of victory! I was with my love! No other could best my beloved Fickle! His strange sapphire blue eyes pierced my soul and his sandy gold, blond straight hair glistened in the candles than adorned the walls of his home.
“Oh, I love you my Goddess of Beauty and Love! Come on! I shall take you home! Your father is worried about you! I’ve had a great reunion with you! I could never stay mad at you!” Fickle insisted.
“Alright! But only if I get to stay here with you tonite!” I demanded.
“Ok!” Fickle kissed me. “And just tell your dad that you fell over!” He added pointing at my knees.
“Sure!” I giggled, I love it how his white lies are simple yet smart!
“Let’s go babe!” he hustled me, wrapping his warm and loving arms around me, I felt safe! We start
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“Alright! See you in the morning!” Credinciosamant kissed my forehead. I waited 30 minutes so that I was sure my plan will work. I walked up to the paddleboat that I saw earlier and climbed in. I unsheathed my dagger and started hacking at the ropes that held it, the boat fell in the water with a mighty crash, and I really felt the turbulence! I gazed at the stars to see which way to go and I saw the pathway, I knew where home was! All of a sudden, all the suspense, tiredness, stress and nervousness came rushing to my heart at the same time! I couldn’t keep my eyes open and I let my heavy eyelids close shut. Everything went black! I woke up as I was thrusted forwards as the boat crashed apon the sand. I was home! I have to see my father, he is probably worried sick about me! But I need to talk to Fickle to say I’m sorry. Oh! This is the worst dilemma I have had in my entire life! Nah! Stuff it, I’m going to Fickle, but first I need to get rid of the boat.
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"Oh! N-no! I'm just...happy!" I smiled and used the sheet to wipe away my tears of joy.
"Then, why are you crying?" Vladimir raised an eyebrow.
"Well, no-one has ever given me something before! This is my first present! So, thank you, Vladimir!" I bowed my head to him. Not even Nick has given me anything besides his time, and Im rich, so I can have anything I want. It feels nice that the first person who has ever given me something was a rather distant person, one who wasn't visibly friendly. He groomed my hair that the cheeky Alejandro had messed up.
"That's a bit better."Vladimir nodded with approval as he kept stroking my hair like a cat. With each stroke, I realised how I feel. I was in love with Nick at first, but like a man's ambition, I wanted something that I couldn't get: Vladimir's heart. I was falling in love with him! That's why Nick's kiss didn't feel right, my heart was subconsciously chasing Vlad's affection. I'd be lying if I said that Nick wasn't attractive, but he had one downfall that got to me: he has had about 9 girlfriends in about 3 months, which I got the hint he wasn't going to stay with me for long if we did have the same feelings for one another.
"Thanks, Vladimir! You're lucky, I only say someone's name when I don't mind them, take it as a rare privilege!" I re-quoted his words. He grinned at my devilish, sarcastic remark.
"Word thief." He shook his head with a light  chuckle. Yeah, I'm in love with him. Without knowing it, he had gotten softer towards me.
"Well, see you later, I have to go finish preparing for hunting the Kishies." His beautiful English with his low Russian accent made me even more lovesick. He walked away while playing with the twin dagger to the one he gave me.
"Well, I'll be damned, lassie! That be de first time he's been so kind to a lassie or any lad!" The stubborn little Scott looked at Vladimir's broad back. I smiled at his remark.
As the night progressed, Balondemu set everyone in pairs: Evelyn with Takeshi, Teimoso with Nick, Louise with Alejandro, Ammon with Balondemu and Vladimir with me.
"Alright, our plan is you are the victim, the beautiful dame that need saving, and hopefully a Kishi will see you 'alone' with no protection. All you have to do is lure them into the shadows, check if they're a Kishi and if they are, then say: ya lyublyu knigi. You got it?" Vladimir was telling me the plan for exterminating the Kishi. I nodded with determination. It's sorta cute that he made the code word the first thing I ever said to him in Russian.
"I'm ready!" I flashed my dagger with pride.
"Remember, I'll be protecting you, that's only for an emergency." He smirked and rolled his eyes. I felt my cheeks heat up in embarrassment. I felt like he was my hot bodyguard, or my modern Prince Charming. I know he is decades older than me but biologically, we're the same age. I was wearing old, typical Egyptian clothes. The colour matched my hair and even though I was wearing what was considered rags, I felt richer than Cleopatra. As I was giggling to myself, a man about twenty years old walked up to me. Before I knew it, he had me behind a building, kissing me and trailing from my lips to my chest.
"Ya lyublyu knigi!" I yelled out to Vladimir. As I finished saying the code words, the perverted Kishi had a blade against his throat, slicing at its neck, and drooling blood.
The demon was on the ground, bleeding to death.
"Thanks, Vladimir!" I was panting.
"Why are you panting like an exhausted dog? Don't tell me you were getting turned on by that devil!?" He grabbed my chin and made me look into his intoxicating eyes.
"What?! No! I was freaking out! I mean, he was kissing me and I just wanted to grab the dagger you gave me and plunge it into his throat. He had my arms pinned behind my back, so I couldn't move! Also, he isn't really my type, so it's alright." I smiled faintly.
"Okay then, you think we can keep this up for another hour or so?" He kicked the corpse like a soccer ball. I didn't reply with words, but my body simply hugged him. He gasped from the shock.
"Oh non! Dis is too sad! He wouldn't stop asking mwa for advice on making a girl fall for him..." Louise crossed her arms with a disappointed smile.
"Are you crazy, sinurita?! He would be more popular than me in Spain! Why?!" Alejandro shouted.
"I-I don't know! I don't know how my heart works, I only know what it wants..." I trailed off.
"Are you sure he is not The One?" Balondemu gently rested his hand on my slumped shoulder. I felt too bad to reply, so I shook my head instead.
"If she back in Japan, she be killed straight away for saying no." Takeshi whispered to Evelyn.
"Indeed! I have heard your beautiful culture has some gruesome laws over there. But I must say, to me, she is an imbecile for even rejecting such a fine man! Not even I could find such a perfect gentlemen. For example, my fiancé was simple minded! He fell for my sister..." Evelyn hung her head sadly. Takeshi handed her a cloth and patted her shoulder.
"I thought you...had a crush on me since we were small. Was I mistaken?" Nick tilted my chin up with the side of his index finger, which was hooked.
"No, you weren't mistaken. Your kiss made me realize that I was just another one of your fan girls, but suddenly got the fact that I wasn't in love with your fame, looks and charisma. I didn't love you as a man, but rather as a big brother. I loved how protective  you were, we were always together and no harm came my way, except maybe the rare paper cuts from your comics. I treasured our time and for once in my life, I was actually loved, not just another responsibility or career obstacle." I hugged him like a little girl would hug a giant teddy bear.
"Oh! Your parents told me that you thought I was 'cute' and so I thought they meant you were in love with me!" Nick giggled.
"You are nice to look at, I'll happily admit that, but I love you in the sibling sense, not the romantic one!" I pecked his cheek. He burst out into laughter while picking me up and swinging me around in a circular motion, like Im a princess. Everyone giggled and clapped their hands, the audience getting louder.
"I believe we should stay and exterminate the Kishi." Balondemu announces. The Pharaoh nodded with consent and gratitude. The sun had been gone for a while by the time we all reached the ship. The crescent moon illuminated our way around the ship until Ammon had lit the lanterns around the ship. The crew were preparing their weapons while Nick and I looked at everyone else as they were organising for hunting the dreaded Kishi. The thought of that Kishi kid alluring me and ripping my face of sent a shiver down my spine, like someone just walked on my grave.
"Cold?" Alejandro draped a warm sheet over my shoulders and ruffled my hair playfully.
"Gah! Not the hair!" I squirmed. He laughed as he walked off, fixing his leather armour straps and adjusting his scabbard. I smirked at his teasing action. What a funny jerk. As I was thinking of little revenge plots, Vladimir tapped my  shoulder, scaring me out of my wits. I gave a little yelp of surprise and I saw him try to swallow his laughter. He couldn't contain his laughter and it spilt out. His laugh  was so sexy, I began to feel really hot in the cheeks, which only made his condition worsen. The whole crew came to a standstill and became dumbstruck at his first fit of laughter.
"Ah, Sozhaleyu! Sozhaleyu, Charlotte!" He had laughed so hard, tears were welling up in his handsome, dark eyes.
"Do that again, and I swear it'll be the last thing you do." I straightened my back and gared icey daggers at him.
"Sozhaleyu, but, uh, I thought you might need a weapon. Here." He handed me a pretty dagger with a strange yet alluring symbol at the top of it.
"Thanks, but I sincerely hope this isn't your form of a peace offering." I started little, happy sniffles. I glided my fingers over the face of the blade and looked up to him with hot tears rolling down my cheeks.
"Whoa! Y-you aren't going to be hurting anyone! Everyone here will be all around the city, all you have to do is scream if worst comes to worse! I swear!" Vladimir freaked out.
I don't know why I followed this strange boy up here or how he got me to do it, but my conscious is back in control and with no more than a few seconds, I ran towards where I thought I heard the crew.
"Charlotte, duck." Vladimir pulled a pistol from his jacket pocket and aimed at the cute, mysterious boy. As I curled into a ball, a dry gunshot rang in the air. I slowly uncurled and all of a sudden, I felt like I was being hugged from behind.
"Sorry I was terrible to you on the ship. I don't really ever apologize, so take this as an rare privilege." As he finished, he stroked my dirty blonde, wavy hair. I felt like I had Regis Mortis, I couldn't move!
"What happened to the boy?" I managed to turn my head to see a limp body, crimson liquid oozed from him and stained the cream clay.
"You mean the Kishi? You aren't blind are you? Your looking at it." His low, sexy Russian accent rang in my ear.
"W-well, uh, thanks! I owe you, big time!" I smiled sweetly at his heroism. He gave me a casual, cold expression and ruffled my hair. I thought he was a pain in the neck with a heart of stone, but I change my mind!
"Your boyfriend is running around, looking like an idiot, let's go put him back in his right mind." He smiled with a twinge of humour. He walked away and raised his hand, twitching two fingers, to gesture for me to follow him. No! Nick and I aren't like that! I stomped up to him. He helped me down from the roof, holding my waist and I glided down to him till we were practically hugging. With one swift motion, Vladimir had already let go of me and was walking down the ancient clay stairs. I giggled under my breath at how much he had a regard for me. He is rude, stubborn, cold and nearly hated by the crew, but I think he has a different side to him, like a Kishi. One face is cold and collected, expressing his stonehearted personality with a side order of sarcasm, but the other side, although rarely shown, was actually rather concerned for others. We found everyone and the first person who came up to me was Nick, wearing a mask of calmness but his true face was grief, worry and fear. He strangled me in a strong hug. Yep, I was right, completely spooked.
"Are you okay?! Did anything happen to you?! Uh, y-your parents would kill me if anything happened to you!" He held my face in his warm hands. He was going through turmoil and emotional turbulence.
"Are ye okay, lassie?" Teimoso cradled my right hand.
"Sinurita, you alright?" Alejandro rubbed my back, reassuringly.
"Hey! Knock it off! Charlotte's mine!" Nick swatted away both the other guys like flies.
"Hehehe!Are you jealo-" his lips interrupted my sentence. He rubbed the back of my neck tenderly. As his sweet kiss ended, he kept his face close enough for me to see he had been crying and also, I could see my reflection in his glazed eyes. His gently smiled and embraced me with one arm around my waist while the other one held my head firmly against his chest. I had always dreamed of him kissing me, and now that he has, I feel a sense of disappointment. It wasn't as amazing as I had dreamed it would be. Like, Nick Jacalar just kissed me! Shouldn't I be feeling giddy?! It didn't feel right, like his lips were never meant to meet mine.
"Sorry, I...I don't feel the same way." I broke his embrace and looked down. His heart shattered into tiny little pieces. I looked at the crowd and all of them had shocked expressions, except for Vladimir, who looked surprised but not entirely interested.
They look as though they've never had a problem or argument in their lives. They were the walking definition of a perfect family. I envied them, with the parents so loving, not only towards eachother, but to their kids. My parents gave me a few hundred thousand dollars and told me I can have whatever I want and need, as long as I didn't get in their way. The afternoon sunset made my face glow as I hung my head while our ship sailed past the happiness and the memory of a happy household. Soon after we had entered the Nile we landed in Sais, where we docked our ship in the Pharaoh's private dock.
" ah , 'annah min aljayd 'ann narakum marratan 'ukhraa, Ammon" the Pharaoh came out.
"It's good to see you too! I wish to introduce my friends." Ammon stepped back with us and gestures for us to bow.
"They look worthy of my trust. I would like you to stay, but we have a terrible creature who migrated in the wrong direction. The Kishi!" The Pharaoh looked troubled and was trying to hide his fear.
"Excuse me, what is a Kishi?" Nick bowed respectfully.
"One side of its head is a man and the other, a hyena. They seduce women to a deserted place and turn their body around to face the lady with their hyena face and eat them. They have been roaming around Sais for a month, a quarter of the female population has been killed." His conflicted look sent a shiver down my spine while Nick freaked out and hugged me, the embrace was making it hard to breathe.
"Im not going anywhere! Im not easily fooled! You should know that better than anyone." I peeled him of me. The others looked at us suspiciously, except for Vladimir, who was clearly not interested.
"Are you two in love?" The Pharaoh awkwardly asked. The question sank in and I went deep red while frantically shaking my head.
"N-no! Never! We are simply friends! That's all!" I became flustered, embarrassed. Alejando came up to me and put his arm around my shoulder.
"Then, you wouldn't mind me taking you for myself?" His teased as his face got closer and pecked me on the cheek. I slapped his cheek as hard as I could and ran into the streets of golden mud houses, with different coloured sheets imitating a door. I ran through an open doorway that led me to some deserted hallway. I panted and held my chest that was ready to explode. After catching my breath for a minute, I felt someone's presence and looked to where I felt it, and sure enough, a guy about my age stood there with an alluring smile. His dark, shoulder length, wavy hair and chocolate eyes had a very seductive aura, he wore a simple ragged cloak and had old looking sweatpants on. He walked up to me and extended me his hand, to which I bowed my head and took his offer. As I caught my balance, he backed me against the wall while slipping his hands around my waist. I tried to break free from his grip but as I struggled, he gently gave me a kiss on my lips. Why is everyone so affectionate today? As my mind went blank, he kept his smile and silently led me up to the roof of the building where we sat and looked at the sunset. He glided his hand up my waist and landed on my chest while urging me to lay my head on his shoulder.
"No! Leave me alone." I managed to get my voice back and pulled away from him.
"Charlotte! Charlotte! Charlotte!" The crew yelled out to me from a distance.
The waves dance, fall, crash and tango but the ship doesn't take any notice of the turbulence. The sea is sparkling like a 901 Blue cocktail and the crew are lively and chatting away like old friends, except Vladimir is sitting in the crows nest while reading a red leather book. Nick is learning pickup lines from Louise, since Paris is 'The City of Love', and Louise is also giving him tips on how to put on a French accent, being French herself. The tiny Scott is sitting on a barrel and sharpening his dagger with a rock of some sort while Evelyn, Takeshi and Balondemu are playing cards on the deck floor. Ammon was taking a nap on one of the shrouds in a hammock type thing. Alejandro is at the steering wheel, admiring the beautiful sea crash and meed like making bread. We've been sailing for about four hours or so. I got sick of listening to Nick and Louise's sappy 'Love Lesson" and climbed up the opposite shroud to Ammon's hammock to eventually reach Vladimir, who was content by reading his tarted book but with a pained, troubled and lugubrious expression. His long jet black hair fell over his face and gently fluttered with the wind while his piercing dark brown eyes concentrated on the words but occasionally faulted and pain shot through them as though he wasn't reading but rather look at old, distressing memories. Near his feet were more books, all in Russian print and looked nearly as old as the one he was reading. He noticed my presence and sent his glare from his book to me.
"Why you up here?" He asked bluntly. 'You looked alone and I was curious? Will that make you stop looking at me with malice?!' I really felt like saying that but I shoved that back down my throat, he looked like he was in pain, so I'll be gentle.
"Uh, ya lyublyu knigi!" I tried using a bit of Russian to look a bit smarter.
"Heh! 'I like books'? That the best you can do?" Vladimir sneered sarcastically.
"Well, I've only been to Moscow twice with Dad, and the first one, daddy was dealing with the president and the second, I believe, was the Red Mafia Boss. I think his name was Kir? Or something strong." I sat on the brim of the crows nest with my arms folded casually. He shot up and grabbed my shoulders with an angry and curious look. His feirce, dark eyes looked into mine like he was trying to see through my eyes.
"Did you say Kir?!" He growled with intense fury. I was too scared and all I could do was nod. He noticed my anxiety and softened his grip.
"Sozhaleyu, I-I mean-"he realised what he was doing.
"Sorry." I ended and interrupted him. He gave a quick nod, silently gathered his books and grabbed a nearby rope.
"Poka Ledi." He swung down to the main deck with one hand holding his book and the other gripped on the rope. He landed perfectly on the barrel where cards was being played.
"That be da finest land ye done! Well done lad!" Tiesomo slapped his knee and bopped his head in acknowledgement. Vladimir simply looked at him and shrugged with a blank expression. A few hours later, we reached the entrance to the River Nile, its rich vegetation spread on the sides of the deep blue water. The local women were doing laundry near the side of the river while the cute little children played tag while annoying the men who were working.
" aldhdhahab yudhun alhaywanata! lays nahn!" The men yelled at the kids running and goofing off. Ammon walked up to me and laid his elbows on the rail of the ship.
"What did that man say?" I looked at his sad yet gentle eyes.
"He say: go annoy the animals, not us." He looked at his beloved land that he called home. His turban fluttered lightly and I could see his loving smile from under his scarf that he had over his mouth. I turned my gaze from his sorrowful eyes to a happy little family, the husband is playing with his two children with a huge grin on his face while his beautiful wife held his elbow and snuggled up to him like a happy cat. They shared a group hug and  laughed when the little boy sneezed and lost his balance, landing on a sand pile.

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digitalbird06 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2016
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Haven't heard from you in awhile, just wanted to say hi and hope you're doing okay
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heya! I haven't been able to get my hands on a computer in ages! im super sorry! but at least I started 2 new books! (Don't distress! im still going on TGD!) but my new ideas are running out with The Generals Daughter
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I was in a bit of a slump on my Fiolee story, but things have been picking up again and have posted a few new pages. Will you be posting your other stories on DA?
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Thank you kindly for the fave, it is most appreciated!
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Thank you so much for the watch!! c:
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Thanks for the Watch! 
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Thank you for the watch!
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thanks for the watch!!
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no, thank YOU for creating such awesome art and comics! you are really talented!
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